<span>Okay, so to make this sentence more interesting we have to add more detail. Watch: Before: I am swinging. After: I am swinging on my big green porch swing with fluffy cushions, listening to the birds chirping and letting the sun hit my face and warm my entire body as I lean my head back and take a deep breath of air that smells of flowers and fresh cut grass. <span>Does that make sense?</span></span>
