I am not quit sure what your question is but I think it is great! :-) Only thing I would change is your hook. With the hook you want something strong to grab the readers attention. Example: Would you stay out late just to suffer many consequences? (Sometjing like that) Try to use something to really make the reader think about your topic!
The first sentence about Siamese cats is correct because the hypens are correctly placed where you pause when reading. The other answers have misplaced the hypens and they aren't in the appropriate place for pausing.
Assuming that you want to fix the vague sentence, it would be better if the sentence is like this :
The school computers arrived with preloaded games. These were the second batch that the school had received
hope this helps
Answer:
It can effect future employment
Explanation:
In some cases a manager will ask for your social media to see what you post. If you posted in the past complaint about working or even a boss, the manager may not want to or even choose to hire you.
