I could see that my fire maker was having a hard time. But I gave him his space, because I wanted the warmth of the fire.
Answer:
Successful at all new things.
Explanation:
he could not been shy and insecure, because it says he wasn't afraid to show it and he rolled his eyes, which shows he is not shy.
it could not be destined to fail, because he says i might to go on in junior high without you.
and it could possibly be enthusiastic and determined, because he sounded really excited, but rolling your eyes is usually annoyance.
So successful at all new things, best fits.
Hope that helps!
I believe the answer is D. Contract.
I chose this answer because 'indenture' means a formal, legal agreement, contract, or document.
The correct answer is They wanted a stronger central government and a chief executive with powers.
The Articles of Confederation aime to keep the states free and independent, so the states would be joined by friendship and not by the strong central government.
Many leaders wanted to replace the Articles of Confederation because the structure of the articles limited the power of the federal government, so they were unable to solve the problems effectively.
Answer:
If you want the honest feedback, I got you. I was really good, but I have a few suggestions to make it sound more "official":
- Italicize sounds (i.e. change "Thud!" to <em>Thud. </em>in the second paragraph)
- Make sure formatting is reasonable and consistent: "1 month later" is too big, the title should be bigger and "Beanbag" is incorrect (it's bean bag)
- Suspense would work very well in this story. I wouldn't reveal who the speaker is until the last paragraph or even last sentence. To do this, you can touch more on the emotional aspects of this story in the introduction and body paragraphs (no naming names, places, things, etc.) Make it abstract as you can to build up to the answers: Who is talking? What happened to them? Why do they feel this way? Things like that.
- Stop being so repetitive with words like "demon" (maybe substitute for "little devil" or "menace")
- I see the humorous aspect of this story, but I would make sure to not include too many spelling and grammar mistakes.
Sorry if my suggestions are a little too intense, but I can tell you are a good writer and can easily improve in these areas! Please let me know if this helps!
