The correct answer is D. It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order.
Explanation:
In writing, paraphrasing implies using the ideas of an external source and author and expressing them by using your own words, because of this a strong paraphrasing would change the language used but keep the essence and main points of the original ideas. In the excerpt presented, the author tried to paraphrase a passage that describes cone snails. However, in the passage paraphrased the author uses the same terms and words than in the original passage which means he or she is not expressing the ideas of the original passage with his or her own words but only changing the order of ideas the text and therefore this is not a strong paraphrasing and can even be considered a plagiarism as the same words and ideas are being used. Therefore, this text can be described as "It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order".
Indoor Plumbing.
Primarily, it has provided a greater level of sanitation in modern life. The use of running water to wash your hands and bathe reduces the likelihood of spreading germs and bacteria. The ability to cleanly remove waste away from heavily populated areas allows for cleaner air, thus, fewer respiratory related illnesses. Ultimately, it has propelled civilizations towards the better quality of life that we enjoy today.
1. change they're to their
2. change an a
3. delete the comma after workhouse
4. add a comma after computer
5. change too to to
Answer:
This story is an important part of both Greek and Roman mythology because it is a story that connects the two cultures. I think that this story could be adapted for our current culture because it addressed issues that are still prominent in our society today. I would create a contemporary version of “Proserpine” featuring an alcoholic (Pluto) a young woman walking home from work at night (Proserpine) and an old lady who witnessed the kidnapping (Hecate).
Explanation:
You can elaborate on that further, I’m sure!
Make sure to include the term “Stockholm Syndrome” (look it up).