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Blababa [14]
3 years ago
11

In which phrase does the writer most need to improve the word choice for clarit

English
2 answers:
Rashid [163]3 years ago
8 0
1. Too much glue makes it sticky.

2.Eliminate weak adverbs and verbs.

3.Turn passive into active.

4.Make your sentences smoother.

5.Cut down on pronouns

6.Vary your sentences

7.Ready to conquer your fears?

kirill115 [55]3 years ago
7 0

Introduce your readers to the "big picture" first by giving them information they already know. Then they can link what's familiar to the new information you give them. As that new information becomes familiar, it too becomes old information that can link to newer information

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