Metaphors and similes are used to add depth and meaning to the poem, so it looks normal on the surface but when you re-read it you uncover a deeper meaning :)
        
             
        
        
        
You should probably give your sentences a bit more length and also shorten the amount of times you say “Morocco” as well as the phrase “ due to the fact”
        
             
        
        
        
To see if the mass is equal