Answer:
On 20 of July 1969, Neil Armstrong became the first man to step on the moon. He and partner Aldrin walked for three hours doings experiments, picking up bits of moon dirt and rocks.
Explanation:
The first and last one the second one is good too but the first and last are better
she is mad becuse kids can't do that i do not know
Explanation:
she dose not like it when littel tim gets manly on hey
Everything looks good so far, label the last paragraph as conclusion.
Make sure to note where the thesis is restated.
"For instance, they can make squeaky noises...etc" is something you can highlight and label as an example/supporting detail. Same goes for your examples in your other body paragraphs.
If its your essay just double check that it transitions smoothly, and you're good to go!
Hope this helps :)
