Question

The original quotation follows statistics on the increase in eighteen to thirty-four year olds owning their own businesses: "The trend may dilute corporate pools of promotable junior managers but provide a needed infrastructure for corporate outsourcing" (Keaveney, 2004, p.102-103). Which paraphrase is most acceptable

Answer 1

Answer:

The paraphrase that is the most acceptable is:

Increasingly, members of the younger generation are becoming entrepeneurs rather than making themselves available to work their way up the managment scale for an individual company; the difficulties this may cause for companies is offset by the services as subcontractors they can provide outsourcing becomes more necessary and more common. (Keavenny 102-103)

Explanation:

All right, first of all, we need to analyze something. Paraphrasing is the concept to call the way we say the same thing someone else said using different words. First, in our original text, we can see that the first lines talk about how a modern phenomenon of popularity will decrease the number of corporate pools, that is said in our final two lines. This is a very way to paraphrase, we change the order of the facts presented without cutting the associations. In our second line from the original text, we observe that juniors or young corporate members of corporations could be promoted to managers, and this is also said in our second and third lines in our paraphrased text. Now our final line in the original text is explained in pour final and the first sentence in the paraphrase. Thus, these are the reasons that make our paraphrase the correct answer.

Answer 2

Answer:

Increasingly, members of the younger generation are becoming entrepreneurs rather than making themselves available to work their way up the management scale for an individual company; the difficulties this may cause for companies is offset by the services as subcontractors they can provide as outsourcing becomes more necessary and more common. (Keaveney, 2004).