The answer is C. This is because but is being used as a conjunction separating independent clauses in the other answers. You can remove but from A, B, and D, and you are left with 2 simple sentences.
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Answer:
The best way to revise the sentence is:
D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.
Explanation:
<u>The original sentence is not really defective, it is only missing a piece of information concerning when the car wash will be held. The best way to add it is to include it at the end of the sentence, as is done in letter D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.</u>
Let's take a look at the other options to understand why they are not usable.
Letter A does begin with the subject of the sentence, but interrupts it with extra information, preventing the sentence from being a direct one. It sounds really confusing. Letter B adds the "on Saturday" information at a strange place, also interrupting the direct flow of the sentence. Letter C puts the "on Saturday" information right at the beginning. It's not that this can't be done. But, in this case, a comma should be added after it. Nevertheless, it makes the introduction of the sentence too long, which is not a good thing.
Answer:
✔The first thing
✔Then
Explanation:
The above words are the details in the text that indicate a chronological structure.
Chronological order/structure refers to a way of organization in which events are arranged or presented in order as they occur or occurred in time. It's known to be a structure of sequence.
Words that denote chronological order/structure in texts are first, third, second, until, then, after, later, at last, next, etc.
In the text, the use of "The first thing" and "then" actually indicate a chronological order.
Can you add more words like one
