Answer:
Whenever there is a pause, or if you are listing something.
Explanation:
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
<span>alliteration, assonance, consonance, and imagery
</span><span>Alliteration is the repetition of the initial sounds of adjacent words.
"</span><span>In the misty mid region of Weir—"
"</span>with Psyche, my Soul"
"<span>were withering"</span>
Consonance<span> is the repetition of </span><span>Consonants.
"</span><span>ghoul-haunted "
"</span><span>cypress"
"</span>sulphurous currents down Yaanek"
Assonance<span> likewise, is the repetition of </span><span>Vowels
</span>"<span>woodland of Weir"
"</span>sulphurous currents down Yaanek"
Imagery is an author's use of vivid and descriptive language to add depth to their work.
"<span>The skies they were ashen and sober;
The leaves they were crispéd and sere—
The leaves they were withering and sere;"
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Pleasantly calm or peaceful; unruffled; tranquil; serenely quiet or <span>undisturbed i got this from dictionary.com</span>
I think it would be 2nd and 4th down lmk if I’m wrong