I believe from what I see that every sentence has been turned from present tense to past tense. One example could be Number 5- Instead of, 'Peter is going to take the package later.", it could be in past tense, as in Peter already took the package- "Later, Peter took the package."
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Its good to include thoughts, feelings, what was special about it..describe to the reader what it was like
Answer:
The final parts of a story in which loose ends are tied up after the climax and conflict have been cleared. (See a plot diagram for more clarification).
