Well, for starters, that is Pope Francis. The picture will wind up in the paper, because you can see in his face and with his hands that something that he saw or heard shocked him. 3)He is just reacting to what had happened. I dont know what to put to go with when and where it was. He looks that way because something that he heard of, or saw had caught him by surprise, and it shocked him, and finally, it occurred because something had caught his attention off guard, and this was his reaction. Hope that helped, b. x)
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
My goal will be to hold study meetups each week. This will help me both improve academically by increasing my knowledge on my coursework, but will help me in the future by increasing my level of social and teamwork building skills. These skills are crucial for most jobs.