What is the subject? I won't be able to help you unless I know what the subject is. Also, is there a passage you could provide?
Thank you
Introduction:
We use an objective tone to provide information in a neutral, impersonal way.<em> An objective tone focuses only in the facts and sticks to the information only</em>, it avoids personal pronouns and judgmental words.
When a text tells us something about the writer (his opinion or how he feels about the subject) we are using a subjective tone.
Answer:
You will regret not listening to me if you fail to use my solution.
- <em>This statement is</em><em> not written in an objective tone</em><em>, because the writer is expressing his opinion on how the reader will feel if he or she doesn't use the writer's solution. </em>
Extending the library's hours by one hour on weekends will maximize students' ability to conduct research.
- <em>This statement is </em><em>using an</em><em> </em><em>objective tone</em><em> because it is sticking to the facts and not expressing any opinion on the topic. </em>
Thank you for taking the time to consider this proposal.
- <em>This statement </em><em>uses an objective tone</em><em>, because it doesn't tells us how the writer feels about the proposal. </em>
Composting waste from lunches is one of my best ideas for helping to save the environment.
- <em>This statement </em><em>is not using an objective tone</em><em>, it is using a subjective tone because the writer lets us know he is excited for having one of his best ideas.</em>
