Could I see the sentences, please?
Sure!
Beautiful name by the way.
Red Chief should stay with Bill and Sam because:
The men handed over the money and the boy – who had actually been happier being away from his super strict father and therefore does not want to be returned to his father.
^He obviously doesn't want to be near his father, as Bill and Sam were more lenient and let him play around.
Sorry I couldn't come up with more, I didn't really read the story that much, again, my apologies.
Toodles~
Cervantes was the author of Man of last Mancha.
C.
at dawn; reach the top; before noon.
A metaphor example in the Raven is "“Prophet!” said I, “thing of evil! ... The raven is the prime example of personification in the Raven because the raven does things such as "Quoth the Raven 'Nevermore. ' " or "... sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only That one word..."