I am not quit sure what your question is but I think it is great! :-) Only thing I would change is your hook. With the hook you want something strong to grab the readers attention. Example: Would you stay out late just to suffer many consequences? (Sometjing like that) Try to use something to really make the reader think about your topic!
That no one can ever measure up to God.
Answer:
big library uptown
Mrs. Long has to go "hat in hand" to the "big library uptown" to ask for the books.
I would choose answer C.
this is because the format of the essay is been informative, and that sentence was opinion orientated, while all the other options presented statistics.
I could be wrong but I think the answer is D.
Hope this helps!!!
