You can't aware the question without the text. I'll look up the story though for sure
A leader is someone who is ambitious of their dreams, and determined to get the job done.<span />
Write In One Sitting. Write the first draft of your story in as short a time as possible. ...
Develop Your Protagonist. ...
Create Suspense and Drama. ...
Show, Don't Tell. ...
Write Good Dialogue. ...
Write About Death. ...
Edit Like a Pro. ...
Know the Rules, Then Break Them.
Hope it is helpful
