Answer:
The revision which is the best example of adding concrete detail is:
Claire Innes was separated from the people around her during the fire and she later found them near the same place they were separated.
The other options do not apply because the original sentence does not talk about Claire Innes' parents or family
Claire Innes became separated from her parents as the flames spread through the city, and she later found them.
In the panic, Claire Innes was separated from her family as they fled, and she was reunited with her father after the fire was extinguished.
In the panic, Claire Innes became separated from her brothers and sisters during the fire and she later found them after the fire was put out.
Explanation:
A. Cooperation is an important value in this culture.
Answer:
The narrator's habit of looking out the window suggests that they long for something different or missing in their life.
Explanation:
This main detail about the narrator and the supporting details in the passage shows that the family might be longing for the life they used to have before such as life at Terra before going to Mars. According to the narrator, his imaginations run wild while looking out of the window. Though little, compared to the others she might have imagined life in Terra.
The sentence in paragraph 7; "Sometimes I wish I got to grow up in Terra and get bigger" supports the idea that the family might have longed for something different or missing in their life.
The correct answer is D, this is 'present perfect' tense. It is formed with the use of the verb HAVE in present simple tense (so, HAVE/HAS), and the past participle of a verb (or the third column of irregular verbs).
A cannot be correct, because then it would say - I hear.
B cannot be correct, because then it would say - I had heard.
C cannot be correct, because then it would say - I heard.
And since there is also HAVE HEARD, the correct answer has to be D.
