The patterns of the sentences should be varied.
<u>Explanation:</u>
Sentence is known as the combination of words which are put together and combined in a specific way to deliver a particular meaning to the readers of that sentence.
There are various ways with which the pattern of the sentences can be combined which involves the combination of the verbs with the subjects, the indirect objects, the direct objects. In this paragraph, the sentence pattern is mostly the same making it less attractive and fluent. It should be different for different subjects.
Answer:
In middle school, I didn't have many friends. I had low self esteem and sat in the back of the class hoping that I wouldn't have to talk to anyone. I do, however, recall a few high points of middle school.
One day, one of my friends was trying to get her backpack out of her locker but was unable to do so. I did the only logical thing, I helped her. I grabbed ahold of the backpack and pulled as hard as I could. I heard a sound and looked down. It was then that I realized I had not pulled the backpack out of the locker, but I had pulled the locker's frame off of the locker.
My friend and I laughed so hard. The following week, an overly-obese man could be seen repairing poor Daisy's locker. A couple screws and the locker was back to normal. Disappointing, really, how all of that hard work could be erased with a gigantic hombre holding a hammer and two screws in a ham-like hand.
Explanation:
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<span>“<span>With a steady stony glance—
Like some bold seer in a trance,
Beholding all his own mischance,
Mute, with a glassy countenance—
She look'd down to Camelot.”</span></span>
These
are the lines that depicts the Lady of Shallot defying the curse.
<span>Previously,
she has heard a voice saying that a curse will befall her if she looks down to
Camelot and in those lines, it shows that she is defying the curse by looking
down to Camelot with a steady and stony gaze.</span>
Answer:
scene:play
Explanation:
part of a whole. A conclusion is a part of an essay, like a scene is part of a play