Question

Franklin Delano Roosevelt (FDR) was born in Hyde Park, New York. He was the thirty-second president of the United States. He was the only president ever to be elected four times. FDR was the president during the Great Depression and World War II. He was the architect of the New Deal. The New Deal was a domestic program that provided economic relief and significant reforms in industry, finance, and housing.
Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?

Answer 1

The patterns of the sentences should be varied.

Explanation:

Sentence is known as the combination of words which are put together and combined in a specific way to deliver a particular meaning to the readers of that sentence.

There are various ways with which the pattern of the sentences can be combined which involves the combination of the verbs with the subjects, the indirect objects, the direct objects. In this paragraph, the sentence pattern is mostly the same making it less attractive and fluent. It should be different for different subjects.

Answer 2

Answer:

a

Explanation:

ead the paragraph.  

Franklin Delano Roosevelt (FDR) was born in Hyde Park, New York. He was the thirty-second president of the United States. He was the only president ever to be elected four times. FDR was the president during the Great Depression and World War II. He was the architect of the New Deal. The New Deal was a domestic program that provided economic relief and significant reforms in industry, finance, and housing.  

Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?

Vary the sentence patterns.

Shorten the sentences.  

Correct the sentence fragments.

Fix the comma splice.