It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
The bandwagon fallacy is in the insistence that good cities are good because they have rail.
Explanation:
The bandwagon fallacy is where the causation of something is confused as an effect.<u> It is the argument that because all the great cities of the country have light rail, our city too should have the same light rail system to be as good as them.</u>
This argument falls apart because the rail will not curb the problems that the passage itself talks about and then willfully ignores. I<u>n fact, bringing the rail to town will actually aggravate some of the issues mentioned here</u>. Which is why the argument becomes more weak.
C He has the Monkey King”s name carved into his finger.
Answer:
From what I know, most of the campers would respect Percy.
Clarisse respects Percy, doesn’t like him. Wants to humiliate him, maim him, etc. But respects him all the same.
Some would be jealous of his success and stuff but they most likely still would respect him.
Campers from the Athena cabin would tolerate him.
Campers from Nemisis would either love him, or hate him.
But yeah. Most would respect him
Some would hate him
Some would love him
But yeah.
Fair, diverged, undergrowth, claim, trodden, and then hence.
