Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!
I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.
Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.
Pictures or videos might be used in a speech. It makes it more entertaining.
Answer:
a). I wish I would have been at the wedding, but I was in India <u>then</u>.
b). Bhutan is one of the least densely populated <u>country</u> in the world
Explanation:
The errors in the above two sentences are the incorrect use of 'then' in the first sentence and the wrong usage of the singular noun 'country' after the phrase 'one of the.' <u>The use of then in the sentence is inappropriate as there is no need to indicate the time as it adds an informal touch to the sentence</u> because <u>it is already understood that the speaker desired to attend the wedding but he couldn't due to being in India</u>. In the second sentence, it is grammatically incorrect to employ a singular noun after the phrase 'one of the' and therefore, it must be 'countries' instead of 'country.'
Answer:
4 is correct
Explanation:
Two girls' cats
The girls have possession of the cats so you need to put an apostrophe after girls BUT there is already an S on the end of girls, so you don't add apostrophe S, just an apostrophe.
