This might be only for my school- we never leave our computers teachers are still rude and you do still have classmates. Still have to fit dress codes on zoom
Okay, so I’m assuming, you’re writing an essay.
First, you should write a list of activities or “things” around your school that could help a student achieve their goal.
For example, study halls or tutoring sessions with fellow classmates.
You’ll want to write an introduction paragraph that introduces your points, then add your points in detail throughout the body paragraphs and write a conclusion with your final thesis statement.
Remember, an essay should be at least 5 paragraphs, but if you don’t have enough information, write only 4. This prevents repeating and writing nonsense!
If you need any more help, let me know!
Um, which summary?
If you're talking about this;
Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results are described.
As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
Why does the summary need to be revised?
Then the answer is:
The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
If The Text Supports All Topics That Will Be Discussed In One Sentence.