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Answer:
Tarak Mehta ka ooltah chashma
Outline your content. ...Cut out the jargon. ...Keep it simple and to the point. ...Cut long sentences in two. ...Remove excessive verbiage. ...Use contractions. ...Remove extra punctuation. ...Use the active voice.Avoid redundancies.Have someone else proofread.Start tidying up your content.
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