Answer:
Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
Answer:
(of a person or their efforts) persisting tirelessly.
Explanation:
Answer:
9. Sentence fragment: Since you don't have it.
10. Run-on sentence: Please help me wash him, he's dirty.
11. Run-on sentence: I hope you like watching baseball, I really love it.
Explanation:
9. This sentence is incomplete; what is "it"? It is technically grammatically incorrect to begin a sentence with a conjunction, such as the words because, since, as, and many more. This sentence does not have a definite subject, but it has a verb, "it".
10. This sentence is composed of two clauses; although they are both related, it is a run-on sentence, since the second clause refers to the first without the use of a word such as "and". The comma could also be replaced with a semicolon or a period.
11. Once again, the second clause within this sentence refers to the first one and has incorrect punctuation.
I hope this helped! If it is still unclear, do visit this/these website(s) about run-on sentences:
http://guidetogrammar.org/grammar/runons.htm
http://www.butte.edu/departments/cas/tipsheets/grammar/run_ons.html
A formal business letter should contain all of the following except
A) a strong argument of why the reader is wrong
B, C, D are important characteristics of a formal business letter.
