<span>The adjectives these and those should be used only with plural nouns.
Those shoes makes sense because there is more than one shoe, but these girl doesn't make sense because there is only one girl.
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Dashes are where you would pause.
Therefor you would say, "The storm seems to be over (slight pause) (thinking, no, wait, it isn't) no, the sky is darkening again."
The answer to the question is informal
