Answer:
This seems fine it just needs to be revised (grammar wise)
Explanation:
Hello Professor,
This is ___, I rewrote the essay and would like to know if I can resubmit it. If not, by any chance can I do some extra credit work to recover my score?
Thank you,
____
Answer: The main idea is the point of the paragraph. It is the most important thought about the topic. To figure out the main idea, ask yourself this question: What is being said about the person, thing, or idea (the topic)? The author can locate the main idea in different places within a paragraph. The main idea is usually a sentence, and it is usually the first sentence. The writer then uses the rest of the paragraph to support the main idea.