The correct answer is probably the Candidates website. It would usually be biased towards the side of the candidate and would not include opposing arguments.
1. Make a Thesis Question. Take your essay topic idea and turn it into a question.
2. Brainstorm Answers. Write down as many ideas as you can think of.
3. Pick a Thesis Answer. Look at your brainstorming and decide your main answer.
4. Make a Thesis Road-Map. Now go back to your brainstorming.
5. Add Emphasis.
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The modifier "<em>As the next manager of Pizza Perfection</em>" is a dangling modifier.
A dangling modifier is a grammatical construct that is ambiguous, for it is not clearly and logically conected to the word it is intended to modify. Therefore, it can be confused as a modifier of a word other than the one intended, or of no word at all. In the case at hand, the phrase seems to be modifying the subject, "you", when, in reality, it is refering to the speaker.
A good correction would be, for example:
"You said you wanted thicker crusts and cheesier pizzas. <em>As </em><em>I am</em><em> the next manager of Pizza Perfection</em>, you will get pizza as near to perfect as we can make it."
1) My mother
2)My mother
3)A present
4)To my father
5)On his birthday every year
6) Give your father a present
B. It has proper grammar...
