Answer: In general, use sentences of different lengths. Also consider moving adverbs or adverb clauses from the end of a sentence to the beginning.
For transitions, think about the relationship between ideas. Is it a time sequence? Use words like first, then, after that, finally. If it's logic, use words like because, since this... then that. Or therefore, as a result.
Explanation:
I knew that I did well on the test.
"knew" and "did" are in the same tense, making them simultaneous events.
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I read this story and so I can say its answer should be 4 (She has gained a deeper understanding of her daughter).
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