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CAN SOMEONE REVISE THIS PARAGRAPTH TO HAVE SYNTAX AND GOOD PNCUATION paragraph To begin with the oldest video game ever made was tennis for two. William Higinbotham made it so people can have fun entertainment with technology. He invented the game in Brookhaven national laboratory on long island in New York in 1958. There are now over 800 thousand video games of all different genres all because a man decided to create a video game in 1958. For example, back then they could not just turn on their game system and play at home they had to go to where they had tennis for 2 and wait in line to play. It says in Tennis for Two by Wikipedia that the game was exceedingly popular during the three-day exhibition, with players lining up to play the game, especially high school students. Those students where literally excited to play the game.

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Tennis for Two is the oldest video game that was ever made. William Higinbotham, an inventor, wanted a game that would allow people to be enterntained while using technology. Higinbotham invented this game in a Brookhaven National laboratory that was located on Long Island, New York. This was in 1958 and because of Higinbotham's invention there are now over eight hundred thousand video games of all different genres available worldwide.

There have been many updates applied to gaming systems since 1958. In 1958 though, Tennis for Two, had a player turn on the game system and then made to wait in line until a space was open. Wikipedia states that Tennis for Two was an exceedingly popular game during the three-day exhibition for this very reason. The excited players would be lining up to play the game, particulary high school students.

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