Where is the picture? If it is art, I would love to see it. I am artist as well and I feel I could give good critique! I’m sure though, whatever it is, it is amazing. All art, I believe, is it’s own masterpiece. Even if you don’t think so, someone else might just fall in love with it. I see improvement as adjustments to style rather than mistakes.
Answer: Bird in Space: The artist wanted to convey the graceful qualities of the bird. He tried to show the movement of the bird by eliminating all the physical features. Wild Turkey: James Audubon took a realistic approach of his image of a bird. There is almost a scientific purpose seen in the detail and technique of his watercolor of the wild turkey. Audubon wanted to show that even though the painting is of a wild turkey, a less beautiful bird, there is still some beauty to his artwork.
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