Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
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Answer:
pianist
Explanation:
Two Kinds is a short story written by <em>Amy Tan </em>about a mother and her obsession with proving that her daughter Jing Mei is a prodigy and makes her undergo several acts she's seen prodigious kids perform but without success. She eventually makes her take piano lessons from a partially deaf instructor of which she doesn't learn and performs badly.