The day i started highschool i didn't have much friends. i felt lonely and far apart from my classmates. i would always get bullied and that's the reason i hated coming to school. i didn't have the guts to stick up for myself until someone else did, in the hallway he spotted me and stuck up from me. since then i've never found such a kind person ever.
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hope i was able to help i'm not the best at this!
No. It should be "Paloma did not make it to work, for her car broke down on the freeway".
I think your answer is C.)
Choice of word can affect an essay, some words would make it unprofessional or hard words would make someone might not want to read the essay.