Question

hich revision corrects the punctuation errors in this complex sentence with two dependent clauses? We picked these apples, when we went upstate which was on Tuesday. Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.” Leave the comma after “apples” and add a comma after “upstate.” Remove the comma after “apples” and do not add any other commas. Remove the comma after “apples” and add a comma after “was.”

Answer 1

Answer:

First of all, I should point out that it is impossible to form a complex sentence with two dependent clauses -- as your instructions say. A complex sentence is composed of an independent clause along with a dependent clause.

The answer is:

Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.”

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