Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Explanation:
I'm going to actually need the text to answer the question
Answer:
In the short story "The Veldt Peter relationship with his father changes from negative to potive. In the beginning of the story it mentions Peter respectfully telling his father that he would not arriive for dinner. It then transitioned later on to Peter wishing for the downfall or death of his father. In the text it states,"I wish you were dead." This quote shows foreshadowing where so it predicts the death of his family. The parents were concerned about there kids love for nursery. Before they could shut it down they were murdered on the virtual Veldt.
Explanation: The relationship between Peter and his father
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They were meant to instruct the people.
Explanation:
These plays were about the bible, saints, or sometimes just about a situation where it's shown the correct path to be taken when choices seem ambiguous. Those plays were meant to teach others how to act and how to be moral and good.
