Take out "which is the largest country in Africa"
, after Tripoli
, after million
change to "twice as large as Brooklyn"
Take out Later
change "much affect" to "a large affect"
change rebuilt to rebuild
not "the" North Africa
capitalize Red Sea
comma between barren and Rocky
change to ", the most prominent being the Sahara desert"
not mad-made, man-made
highest *point
change to "affect Libya's climate"
comma after winters
take out "unlike NYC"
comma between month and while
change taken over to overpowered
Change "it still continues today" to "he is still in power today.
no comma before since
take out "up" in partnered up
head *of government
take out"meaning the colors"
change events to aspects
"is what Libyans say"-change to "is a phrase common among Libyans"
no semicolon
in this holiday to on this holiday
take out everything in the sport paragraph before "soccer is the most admired *sport* in Libya'
change to "women's clothing rules are as follows:"
see-through
It’s form pls mark as brainlist
Dear Mayor Levine,
We send our children to school so that they can learn the
skills that they need to prepare them for the challenges of life. In order to make this possible, we want them
to learn in an environment that is safe and secure. We truly believe that this
encourages them to learn and take part in school activities.
Lately, however, we are now troubled by reports that there
many unruly students who cause trouble for the school and other students as
well. What is more alarming is that many
of them are carrying concealed weapons and we are afraid that our children’s
lives will be at risk.
We urgently request
that your office to do something about this problem. We are worried about the
safety and welfare of our children is now at risk because of these recent
developments. We will be happy to work
with you in creating a safe in environment for our children to learn in school.
Thank you and God Bless!
Very Truly Yours,
John Doe
