The summary being spoken of is culled from this passage;
- As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
This summary ought to be revised because;
- C. The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.
In the passage above, we see a summary that lacks cohesion and structure because of the lack of transitions at the beginning of sentences.
Transition words make sentences easy to read because they link up ideas. Examples of transition words are, however, since, but, though, etc.
The above summary lacks these transition words that connect ideas. Therefore it has to be revised for better comprehension.
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Simply just to tell them to stop or force them off it
I have done my part by offering my helping hand and have always extended it to other students in need. I have always been the helpful type, and this habit derives from personal frustration when it comes to not knowing what I need to know in order to strive for comfortability in my environment. I try to guide others and relay information that I have learned over time in hopes that it makes someone’s situation or current problem easier.
I have also been a very big advocate for equality on campus and would participate in activities that were all inclusive due to the overwhelming stresses of those who feel left out or discriminated against.
Not only would I work to make my school more enjoyable for myself, but I also work towards making it enjoyable for other’s as well.
It would cleanse the village of sin because the killing was a crime against the earth goddess.<span>
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