Susie has asked three of her classmates to peer edit her report on Air Force One, in which she used this sentence (8). She asked
her friends to make recommendations for corrections. Which friend is right? A) Susie is correct in thinking the passage is correct as is.
B) Joe is correct in suggesting the passage should be changed to the passive voice.
C) Latoya is correct in suggesting that enters be made plural to agree with the subject "Members".
D) Terrell is correct in suggesting that the prepositional phrase "in the news media" be set off by commas.
They think that Betty has been bewitched so if she really was she would not be able to survive hearing the Lord's name. More likely the reason was that she heard everything about the affair between John Proctor and Abby.
