Read the sentence.margot prefers the action of a hockey game to watching ice skating performances.which revision corrects the fa

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Lynna [10]

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Read the sentence.margot prefers the action of a hockey game to watching ice skating performances.which revision corrects the fa

ulty parallelism in the sentence?

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Stels [109] · Answer 1 · 2022-06-12T23:22:16+03:00

Since there are no given options, let me just correct the given sentence in order for it to show correct parallelism.
<span>"Margot prefers watching a hockey game to watching ice skating performances." What is wrong with the given sentence is that, the other noun is in the gerund form while the other is not. These two should be changed either in a gerund form, or in a simple noun form. Hope this helps.</span>