I need help writing another body paragraph. The first paragraph is the Introduction and the Second is the first body paragraph I
have.
Thousands of people get hurt from playing sports each year. Some of these sports can be dangerous, such as football, horse riding, soccer, and so on. In soccer, you might trip and sprain a leg. In horse riding, you can fall off at any time and break a bone, your back, or worse. Playing football, a high contact sport, an accident might happen, and you could even get brain damage. I could go on and on, but there is so many to list. These can have a huge impact on you. “Stop Sport Injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. From football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. So, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision.
People lose their loved ones to sports accidents everyday all over the world, and people can no longer bare it. People are making a stand. We should limit the amount of sports that are being played. If someone were to survive a sports accident, they can still be seriously injured to where they can no longer do everyday things like walking or even putting on their own clothes. Already, according to studies shown by Rule of sports, http://www.rulesofsport.com/faq/what-is-the-world-s-most-dangerous-sport.html, it states, “Deaths per year 1,770”. That’s just from swimming. Although the odds of dying from swimming are over 1 out of 55 thousand, theres still the one that counts, and it can be deadly. The same with base jumping, it can be very dangerous. The same site says that every year, there is 43,170 casualties. The chances to dying from it is 1 out of 2,317.
