Ungrammatical is the answer because of the incorrect use of pronouns.
        
                    
             
        
        
        
Word control is the answer 
Don’t know what the other guy meant by point of view for information :)))
        
             
        
        
        
I don’t see what is so confusing about that also we can’t help you because it says provide at least one quote from the original speech and well whatever it is I need to read I don’t know the name of it.
Just reply to this comment with the things I need and I’ll try to get it done.
Sorry