For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Old major, Mr.Jones's prize-winning boar, was a highly respected animal in Animal Farm. He called a meeting in the bug barn with all the animals to discuss a strange dream he had.
i think i might be wrong but it might be A.irony/sarcasm
Answer:
He sat in the front section of a bus.
Explanation:
Answer:
It is preferable to study English in an English speaking country
