I think you should cut out “Stop Sport Injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. From football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. So, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision."

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“Stop Sport Injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. From football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. So, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision. People lose there loved ones to sports accidents everyday all over the world, and people can no longer bare it. People are making a stand. We should limit the amountof sports that are being played. If someone were to survive a sports accident, they can still be seriously injured to where they can no longer do every day things like walking or even putting on there own clothes.

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