Answer:
The revision which is the best example of adding concrete detail is:
Claire Innes was separated from the people around her during the fire and she later found them near the same place they were separated.
The other options do not apply because the original sentence does not talk about Claire Innes' parents or family
Claire Innes became separated from her parents as the flames spread through the city, and she later found them.
In the panic, Claire Innes was separated from her family as they fled, and she was reunited with her father after the fire was extinguished.
In the panic, Claire Innes became separated from her brothers and sisters during the fire and she later found them after the fire was put out.
Explanation:
Answer:
A: He is growing angry at the accusations being made against him.
Explanation:
When reading in the excerpt, you can tell that Steve's tone of voice and wording is quite aggressive. He seems really annoyed at Charlie. It also says he interrupts Charlie in the stage directions, which is again, quite aggressive. By reading the excerpt closely we can understand Steve's tone and formality. By reading we can interpret how he is growing angry. So, option A makes the best sense.
