Question

What are the errors?

Answer 1

somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right

Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma

Second sentence Thoughts rushed  "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through

Answer 2

"plain" needs to be "plane".

"threw" needs to be "through".

"begin" needs to be "began".

"as" needs to be "As".

"walk" needs to be "walked". There needs to be a , after "walked".

"write" needs to be "right".

"their" needs to be "there".

"was" needs to be "Was".

"hear" needs to be "heard". There needs to be a ? after "heard".

"surely" needs to be "Surely".

There needs to be a . after "not".

"cooksville" needs to be "Cooksville".

There needs to be a , after "Nevertheless".

"cood" needs to be "could".

Also, there might need to be "sound" after "rustling".

That's all I could find, but there might be more...