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Well, if you think about it, if your sentences are super short, you get right to the point and we don't know any of the important details.
Example: The dog died. (short and choppy)
Verses: The suffering K-9 limped along the alley, energy slowly dripping away. He walked in the rain, not noticing the puddles he was trodding through. At length, he reached his almost flooded dog house, where he laid down. His he fell asleep never to wake again, finally at peace.
Make sense? Hope this helped! Sorry for the depressing example ;)
Answer:
Dear sang-jun,
Last week, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the national museum. We went there to study historic artifacts and gather information about them for our class project. The museum was large. We came across many interesting historic and cultural objects. Like turbans, swords, and some other objects like crowns of former rulers. I enjoyed seeing so many amazing things. As you know, Maldives is famous for many amazing things, like our culture, traditional food, and dress, folk stories, etc. And the best part was that we got to see the great artworks about our tradition. At the end of the lesson, the teacher asked us questions to understand what we learned. We took notes, shared our ideas, and did a pop quiz. We also did great jobs in our projects. They were very informative.
