Question

Jorge Smith 123 Main Street Anytown, IL 12345 Mrs. Parker: Our annual awards banquet will be held in January. We would be honored if you would agree to be our key speaker. Please find all the relevant information in the attached itinerary. We will contact you in a week’s time to see if there is any other information you require and to answer any questions you might have. Sincerely, Jorge Smith Which part of the letter needs revision in order to be appropriate for a formal letter?

Answer 1

Answer:

The salutation is the part of the letter that needs revision in order to be appropriate for a formal letter.

Explanation:

The salutation of a letter needs to have an expression to greet the person, in this case, being the letter written in formal context, the correct expression would be Dear Mrs. Parker instead of just saying Mrs. Parker, this part of the letter is very important since it is the introduction to the rest of the document.

Answer 2

"Dear Mrs. Parker," instead of "Mrs.Parker:"