Its correct except for the second last line. you should write: It's a world where we can feel and make use of the real world in a natural, constructing and in a rewarding way. well that's the only mistake in my opinion.
because misfit told the grandmother that he was punished for a crime he did not remember, and the lesson he took with it. and to misfit any crime that is committed no matter how big or small the punishment will be the same
