Question

Please check me Whether the writing is correct according to the grammar If it is wrong then correct for it

Answer 1

Answer:

the grammar is okay but you have used capital letters where it should not be used. Also, in some places the required fullsyop and commas are missing.

Answer 2

Answer:

Its correct except for the second last line. you should write: It's a world where we can feel and make use of the real world in a natural, constructing and in a rewarding way. well that's the only mistake in my opinion.

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