In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
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he feels Mr. Antolini's hand stroking his head. i think
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Suddenly disappear. That conveys the thought that something so dramatic happened to society that the first amendment is gone. That should stir every American into finding out what this sentence is about. The first amendment is the backbone of American Democracy and should not ever be ignored.
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e) General Sports Fans
Explanation:
A: While football is a sport and the passage did include sports, it didn't specifically mention the sport of football. The passage went into more detail about an online game called Dark-Cloud,
B: If this transcript was meant for retirees(people who are retired and don't work anymore), then the passage would talk about things like bingo or retirement homes. While many retirees do enjoy sports, it isn't really their main focus.
C: While students can enjoy sports, the passage didn't have any references to students or what students do, like school. Students aren't the main audience of this transcript even though they can be included.
D. Even though the transcript went into detail about a video game, it wasn't all about online games for regular gamers. It also includes sports. Now, sports includes both athletic sports like basketball and football and also online sports including competitive video games like Overwatch or Fortnite.
E: Yes, this transcript focuses on general sports fans. Fans of both athletic and online sports games. The transcript discusses both athletic and online sports, so its main audience is general sports fans.
