Read the paragraph that Deepak wrote to explain how he used a checklist to revise his paper. I checked my transitions to make su
re they made sense. I also reread my sentences to determine whether they were too similar in style and length. I fixed a couple to add variety. I found one or two words that needed extended definitions and added them. I made sure that I summarized all research evidence throughout the paper. Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can Deepak do to strengthen his paper? He should try to keep all of his sentences the same length. He should use more than one technique to integrate his evidence. He should make sure he has a transition for every sentence in the paper. He should avoid extended definitions that provide too much information.
He should use more than one technique to integrate his evidence.
Answer: Option B.
Explanation:
In the paragraph given above, the revision techniques of Deepak used in a paper are being talked about. These techniques make sure that the paper that has been attempted is free from errors and is appealing enough for the examiner to read.
To make the revision list better and to make sure that the paper is good, he should not use only one single technique. The techniques used for the evidences should be more than one so that it becomes interesting to read and the monotony of presenting the information in one single way is also broken.
The Incan Empire and the Spanish Empire were similar in two ways. Both Empires had powerful armies and had both conquered many vast territories. Both Empires also had powerful and organized systems of government. Both of the Empires kept official records and were ruled under one person.
Answer: Electricity became important during the Second Industrial Revolution in the late 1800s. Electric lights allowed factories to stay open longer and produce more goods.
