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GaryK [48]
3 years ago
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PLEASE HELP I NEED FEEDBACK ON THE PARAGRAPh.

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german3 years ago
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Commas after “and” then also you have too many run on sentences
Contact [7]3 years ago
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It's good but there are some fact that need to be fixed
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